Let us be concerned for each other 

by Leela Ramdeen, Chair, CCSJ and Director, CREDI 

The joint Spoken Word initiative of CCSJ and the Youth Commission proved to be a real treat. We say ‘Thanks’ to the 17 young contestants who ‘fired-up’ TCN’s studio on Friday October 30. Each received a Medal of Participation. The three winners were: 1st prize: Michael Logie, Tunapuna; 2nd prize: Shineque Saunders, Princes Town; and 3rd prize: Darrion Narine, St Joseph. 

Since the competition was part of ‘Justice, Peace and Community Week’, the theme was: Building inclusive communities. 

Michael’s reference to Hebrews 10:24 is noteworthy. Rather than ‘bruising’ each other, “Let us be concerned for each other, to stir a response in love and good works.” CCSJ is seeking to publish the contributions of each contestant. We must acknowledge the talent of our youths.   
Here is Michael’s winning contribution: 

CCSJ Spoken Word winners Michael Logie and Shineque Saunders.

CCSJ Spoken Word winners Michael Logie and Shineque Saunders. 

“Look at us……Where are we going? 
I mean we living 
We working 
And we were once employed in the most heavenly job…..and we got fired. 
Now we’re living in hell fire that we call home 
A home, that isn’t even built. 
I had to say isn’t because we only focus on gathering material things 
We intend to build a house that God wouldn’t see fit 
And I guess the foundation for building anything is the blueprint 
So some people out here would do anything for the blueprint 
Because that’s where our vision is lying 
But if money is all that we are seeing then our vision is lying 
And once they attain that blueprint 
We then focus on designing 
Designer clothes 
To comfort our souls that they already lost to fame and fortune 
To comfort our souls 
That they already lost to greed 
Because once someone seems to be well dressed or dressed better than us 
We become covetous 
For some clothes. 
I hope when we make our way up to heaven we don’t be angry 
When we see the door with a sign saying ‘Close.’ 
Then we place a roof on our evil home 
We place every piece of wood neatly and make sure it snaps into place 
We make sure that living ounce of flesh gets his neck snapped out of place 
And the roof is now completed after we treat our brothers like dogs. 
Roof! 
And that’s the house that we use our souls to build 
The devil’s paradigm 
To create the devil’s paradise. 
But what we need to do is remove our disguise 
And realize that the only blueprint we should be chasing is the skies 
Because we need GOD 
And we need to understand, that it doesn’t matter if Christ is a black, blue, green or yellow man 
It doesn’t matter 
So we must end the hate and stop uttering 
The negative insults to the Indians, Africans, Chinese 
Let’s take our minds out of the gutter 
And make amends 
Then graciously wear the fabric that the maker mends. 
Let’s mend together a community 
From the one month old child 
To the 93 year old granny 
And it’s only then, when all are involved another important element for our house evolves……. 
A tank. 
Then when we open our hearts and fill the tank with love 
We would truly feel the essence of being thankful 
The youths must produce the spark to shock the elders 
And the elders must be good conductors of these shocking results 
Because it takes a village to raise a child 
But only one crooked child to raise a village into chaos. 
Let us neglect the anger 

And raise the younger generation into believing that they have the strength and power to raise up ceilings 
We have the strength and more power in our souls than Power Gen… 
C’mon 
Clap your hands if you think we should start to empower our women. 
I know grandparents too sweet like sugar cane 
So let us not leave our grandpas and grannies to decay 
But instead let’s be the cane that they use to get across the street. 
My granny always has a cross around her neck 
So I will pray for my granny from now until she cross paths with death. 
Parents, don’t disappear 
Be a pair to your kids 
Mother and Father. 
And don’t ever leave bruises on their skin 
As for me, 
I’m not going to hurt you 
But I am going to leave you with a bruise 
Hebrews10:24 
And let us consider one another to provoke unto love and to good works 
Because everyone deserves to be loved 
In the development of an inclusive community. 

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